Comments on: 5 Senses- Alex’s Shoes http://writephilly.wordpress.com/2008/07/23/5-senses-alex%e2%80%99s-shoes/ Work From the Philadelphia Writing Project's Summer Writing Camp Thu, 31 Jul 2008 22:24:14 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: fbh3693 http://writephilly.wordpress.com/2008/07/23/5-senses-alex%e2%80%99s-shoes/#comment-55 fbh3693 Wed, 30 Jul 2008 15:29:29 +0000 http://writephilly.wordpress.com/?p=38#comment-55 nice, a powerful beginning. nice, a powerful beginning.

]]> By: nickt47 http://writephilly.wordpress.com/2008/07/23/5-senses-alex%e2%80%99s-shoes/#comment-49 nickt47 Tue, 29 Jul 2008 15:55:17 +0000 http://writephilly.wordpress.com/?p=38#comment-49 yo, lee haha. ok i like this. in the beginning it has a lot of energy, and then you get descriptive. is good yo, lee

haha. ok

i like this. in the beginning it has a lot of energy, and then you get descriptive.

is good

]]> By: aphilly124 http://writephilly.wordpress.com/2008/07/23/5-senses-alex%e2%80%99s-shoes/#comment-44 aphilly124 Tue, 29 Jul 2008 02:43:15 +0000 http://writephilly.wordpress.com/?p=38#comment-44 haha. you're great lee =] haha. you’re great lee =]

]]> By: AnnMarie http://writephilly.wordpress.com/2008/07/23/5-senses-alex%e2%80%99s-shoes/#comment-21 AnnMarie Fri, 25 Jul 2008 19:03:31 +0000 http://writephilly.wordpress.com/?p=38#comment-21 I like the onomotopeia here --you are into the writing. I like the onomotopeia here –you are into the writing.

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